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Zachary Wagner
4/16/2018 10:13:15 am
Overall, I greatly enjoy how your group broke down and established what your project was, as well as the research and model descriptions you provided. The reflective introduction was well thought out, covering why the Gloria Gemma organization need the work done, and what went in to planning and processing a potential solution. This solution being several blog posts covering six months of content, each month covering a different topic relating to cancer. The research done as well is very thorough, with each topic covering many subdivisions, such as “organic vs non-organic”, which covers what organic food is, what can or can not be in food, and how consuming organic food affects cancer rates. There are direct quotes for nearly every fact given, and the facts are discussed in context of the source and how they relate to health. This health, additionally, is both mental and physical, which aids in both educating and reaching a more broad audience. The more topics and issues covered, the more people will pay attention to the posts. Once again, this is a very well-written, well planned final project, and I look forward to seeing the final project.
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Issy Changsut
4/16/2018 12:03:02 pm
I think this is a very effective and well organized plan. I felt very connected to the information that you guys communicated. It was incredibly informative and all of the information was extremely relevant to your target audience. Cancer is a topic that is receiving more and more funds for research and continues to affect many people. I'm sure everyone's life has been touched by cancer in some way. Along with this, the topics that you chose to investigate are extremely popular. There's sort of a health movement going in terms of organic and non-organic foods. Being in college, alcohol and e-cigarettes relationship to cancer was also very interesting. How do you plan on communicating this information? Through the website or would these also be covered briefly in your instagrams? Overall, I think this is really really well done and I'm honestly looking forward to your finished product!
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Sarah Nicolson
4/16/2018 12:12:55 pm
All in all I am very excited to see the how this project progresses with Instagram and blog posts. As a reader who is not very well knowledgable on breast cancer, or cancers in general, I really enjoyed and was intrigued on your groups individual subject posts. I think all the subjects are very important, and well thought out, as the writers seem very educated on the topic they picked to write about. For example, the section where Juuls were discussed I found insane, how one pod it equal to a pack of cigarettes. This is a good example of how to reach a younger audience, as this is a very popular product Gloria Gemma might not be aware of.
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Ava Mastrostefano
4/16/2018 12:20:57 pm
I think you guys have a good basis for your project. You seem to have a great deal of background information on each of the subjects you want to focus on. You introduction gives a good reasoning as to why your project is necessary for the success of this organization, and about the unique perspectives you offer as college students. I do have a few questions:
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Ethan Jordan
4/16/2018 07:41:14 pm
I must first admit that I have never used Instagram, but I can say that all in all I think you have a great idea and are familiar with utilizing the platform for your project. I think that all the topics that are your major talking points are very relevant to millennials (especially vaping and drinking), I have personally experienced or seen evidence of all the discussed issues since I started going to RWU (except for inflammation). You’ve clearly done a lot of research into each of your individual topics. I like what you have for your model Instagram post, it seems to be worded in a proper manner that it could generate enough curiosity for someone to click on it. A recommendation that I would like to make is to investigate what makes good click bait considering the massive amounts of it that already exists and find out what you can use to make your posts stand out from all the others. Your idea for your website also sounds very appealing and helpful to viewrs looking into the topic discussed. Overall it seems to be on the right path and I look forward to seeing where it goes in the future.
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mashhor
4/17/2018 11:22:16 am
Hi there ,
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Rianna
4/19/2018 08:42:03 am
Great job with the overall project! It is full of great information that would be beneficial to readers. I like how you are also trying to target millennials in this project and using social media is a great way to do that.
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